What’s gone wrong at Al Jazeera English?

Check out the anonym­ous piece below on Al Jaz­eera Eng­lish, pos­ted — bizar­rely — in the com­ments sec­tion of a Dubai media blog on 26 Decem­ber, 2007. It cer­tainly chimes with some of the things I’ve heard. And fur­ther below, more on soft-pedalling re. Saudi Ara­bia at AJE’s Arabic sis­ter chan­nel:

What’s gone wrong at Al Jaz­eera English?

Al Jaz­eera Eng­lish, a one bil­lion dol­lar pro­ject fin­anced by the Emir of Qatar and based in the small Ara­bian Pen­in­su­lar, prom­ised a fresh per­spect­ive on world news. The crit­ics may have hailed the chan­nel and com­pli­men­ted its unbiased report­ing, but behind the scenes things have not been nearly so suc­cess­ful with mor­ale at the sta­tion on the decline for the past year.

Al Jaz­eera Eng­lish (AJE) prom­ised to give voices to the voice­less. Unfor­tu­nately for staff at the Doha base of AJE, the voice­less have turned out to be the very staff try­ing to pro­duce the news.

In an extraordin­ary meet­ing held last Thursday, a tired look­ing Nigel Par­sons, Man­aging Dir­ector of AJE, took ques­tions from an angry group of over 100 from all levels of the com­pany. Up to then, staff have had to keep their com­plaints to them­selves. Unfor­tu­nately for Nigel Par­sons he walked straight into a vol­ley of extraordin­ar­ily upset staff who were not hold­ing back with their venom.

What has happened at AJE? What led to Nigel walk­ing into the verbal equi­val­ent of a lynching?

Delayed for over 18 months, it began trans­mit­ting on 1 Novem­ber, 2006, but much like some of the new build­ings in Doha, almost imme­di­ately cracks began to emerge. If one was to pin­point the exact moment a nail was hammered into the heart of AJE, it was per­haps in the 48 hours before launch, when a fate­ful decision was made, to change the name from Al Jaz­eera Inter­na­tional to Al Jaz­eera Eng­lish — a small change on the face of it, but behind the scenes the change was more than just a name.

It was at this moment that AJE would no longer be a stand alone chan­nel with all of its own in-house ser­vices but would become part of the Al Jaz­eera Net­work, this Net­work includes sports, doc­u­ment­ary and children’s channels.

Overnight senior depart­mental man­agers and their staff became obsol­ete. Man­agers of fin­ance, pro­gram­ming, per­son­nel, tech­no­logy, engin­eer­ing and oth­ers sud­denly found them­selves answer­ing to exist­ing man­agers with their own staff. None sur­vived 12 months.

Imme­di­ately the qual­ity of ser­vice dropped. This came as no sur­prise to staff in Doha, and what was clear to staff seemed unex­pec­ted to the new man­agers. With no new staff, exist­ing teams of people used to deal­ing only with Arabic Al Jaz­eera, now had over 400 new staff — mainly from West­ern Europe — to deal with. The depart­ments most under stress were also the most import­ant ones — per­son­nel and finance.

This added work­load res­ul­ted in long delays to fam­ily visas, med­ical check-ups (man­dat­ory for expats in Qatar) and con­tract issu­ance. Now many people accep­ted the ini­tial delays as part of doing busi­ness in the Gulf, a place where gla­cial is the term used to describe any busi­ness activ­ity. Only the ser­vice didn’t get any bet­ter, and things deteri­or­ated further.

The lack of a ded­ic­ated per­son­nel depart­ment has meant chronic delays in hir­ing addi­tional staff. This, coupled with an unof­fi­cial ban on any staff being hired from Europe/Australia/NZ, meant man­agers were forced to scrabble through CVs to find people fit­ting the new profile.

Also man­agers were forced to obtain a clear­ance from the board of dir­ect­ors for all new mem­bers of staff, and if the board rejec­ted your choice for a pos­i­tion you were forced to go back to square one.

In addi­tion to this, and almost unbe­liev­ably, no one at AJE has been given a con­tract since June 2006, and the staff that were issued con­tracts were told shortly after they arrived that the prom­ised bene­fits were not guaranteed.

It was shortly after June that the cuts began — two flights home became one, full med­ical bene­fits sud­denly became sub­sid­ized only, and most con­tro­ver­sially, rumours star­ted fly­ing that school fees would no longer be paid. A dev­ast­at­ing blow to the many people who had brought their chil­dren to the Qatari desert. Many with large fam­il­ies now faced crip­pling costs of sky high school fees, forced up by an influx of expats that have flocked to the coun­try in the last couple of years.

Fam­il­ies that only 18 months ago were pre­par­ing a for new life in the desert King­dom now have to face the fact that they will have to return to their respect­ive coun­tries much sooner than planned.

Along with the imme­di­ate loss of bene­fits and the fin­an­cial implic­a­tions this has on staff a more fun­da­mental prob­lem exists at AJE.

Since the integ­ra­tion into the Net­work, AJE has found itself slowly being drawn into the archaic ways that the Arabic chan­nel had always run on. Thus, in 2007, the chan­nel was now being forced into work­ing prac­tices not seen in tele­vi­sion since the 1980s.

One of the fun­da­mental prob­lems was the idea of multi-skilling. In a mod­ern news­room it’s unheard of for an indi­vidual to hold a single role, journ­al­ists now edit pack­ages, a dir­ector can vis­ion mix, a cam­era oper­ator does sound, a sound-man does autocue, etc. News is now based around the idea. The res­ult of this and the mod­ern tech­no­logy involved in the new chan­nel, is a staff level half that of its sis­ter chan­nel, but the wage bill is not half.

A point of dis­agree­ment at the Arab chan­nel. For an out­sider it seems obvi­ous that it’s bet­ter to pay a single Director/Vision Mixer £40k p.a. rather than pay a Dir­ector £40k and the Vis­ion Mixer £40k — to any­one the sav­ing was clear, how­ever, to the bosses at the Arabic sta­tion these were unheard of sums to be paid to an individual.

To this end all salar­ies offered to staff since June 2006 have been sig­ni­fic­antly lower than ones offered before that date. This has com­poun­ded the employ­ment prob­lems of man­agers who face hav­ing to hire staff on some­times half the ori­ginal wage of their colleagues.

The prob­lem is that £40k for a Vis­ion Mixer/Director was already on the low side of industry scales and the same held true across AJE. Remem­ber these roles are based in Doha, Qatar, not cent­ral London.

Con­trary to industry assump­tions the com­pany were not hand­ing out gold bars at the arrivals lounge, the wages have only ever been con­sidered aver­age, what made the wage accept­able to many was the over­all pack­age of bene­fits includ­ing hous­ing, and the fact that due to Qatar’s huge oil wealth there is no income tax.

Now, of course, no tax may have attrac­ted a few, but talk to staff and the over­rid­ing feel­ing is that staff signed up to be part a his­toric chan­nel launch. It is this that has kept the chan­nel going des­pite the now chronic staff short­ages and the gradual erod­ing of benefits.

Now though it seems that the staff have had enough. Its not quite clear what the straw that broke the camels back actu­ally was, school­ing per­haps or the fact that in a coun­try where infla­tion runs at 15%, the com­pany seems to have ruled out any pay rises. Or it may have been the over­whelm­ing feel­ing that des­pite many mem­bers of staff put­ting in over 70 hour weeks and not tak­ing leave for over a year, Al Jaz­eera doesn’t really seem to care.

It seems that the ded­ic­a­tion of the staff that’s pro­duced the award win­ning pro­gram­ming no longer have any respect from the Al Jaz­eera Man­age­ment, the feel­ing that “we are being used” was a pop­u­lar sen­ti­ment of the meet­ing. Pas­sions are run­ning so high that when one mem­ber of staff sug­ges­ted a 24-hour strike a ripple of “hear, hears” filled the room.

And it seems that the voices and con­cerns raised in the past year have been fall­ing on deaf ears. It tran­spired early in the meet­ing that Nigel Par­sons, the Man­aging Dir­ector, is not invited to Al Jaz­eera board­room meetings.

Instead he admit­ted to a stunned room that he gained his inform­a­tion through his sec­ret­ary who talks to another sec­ret­ary who sits in on the board­room meet­ings. It would appear that even at the highest levels there seems to be a lack of respect.

And it didn’t not go unnoticed that when a Man­aging Dir­ector gets his inform­a­tion from his sec­ret­ary there must be fun­da­mental prob­lems with the com­pany structure.

And the res­ult of the reduc­tion in bene­fits, and a seem­ingly uncar­ing atti­tude from the Net­work, over 13 resig­na­tions this week alone.

The MD is bra­cing for more as many people joined on two year con­tracts between Novem­ber 2005 and June 2006. Al Jaz­eera could be facing a ser­i­ous staff­ing crisis.

Clearly some­thing has to give, with your staff threat­en­ing walkout, and resign­ing at an alarm­ing rate it would appear that things will only get worse before they get better.

The ques­tion is though, with a Man­aging Dir­ector seem­ingly cut out of any decision mak­ing pro­cesses, how much worse will it get.

Will the chan­nel become a one bil­lion dol­lar white ele­phant before it cel­eb­rates its second birthday?

Whilst mean­while, at Al Jaz­eera Arabic, accus­a­tions in the New York Times that it has — as pre­dicted — softened its tone in report­ing on Saudi Ara­bia:

The newly cau­tious tone appears to have been dic­tated to Al Jazeera’s man­age­ment by the rulers of Qatar, where Al Jaz­eera has its headquar­ters. Although those rulers estab­lished the chan­nel a dec­ade ago in large part as a forum for crit­ics of the Saudi gov­ern­ment, they now seem to feel they can­not con­tinue to ali­en­ate Saudi Ara­bia — a fel­low Sunni nation — in light of the threat from Iran across the Per­sian Gulf.

The spectre of Iran’s nuc­lear ambi­tions may be par­tic­u­larly daunt­ing to tiny Qatar, which also is the site of a major Amer­ican mil­it­ary base.

The new policy is the latest chapter in a gradual domest­ic­a­tion of Al Jaz­eera, once reviled by Amer­ican offi­cials as little more than a ter­ror­ist pro­pa­ganda out­let. Al Jazeera’s broad­casts no longer routinely refer to Iraqi insur­gents as the “res­ist­ance,” or vic­tims of Amer­ican fire­power as “martyrs.”

The policy also illus­trates the way the Arab media, des­pite the new freedoms intro­duced by Al Jaz­eera itself a dec­ade ago, are still often treated as polit­ical tools by the region’s auto­cratic rulers.

What the US military thinks of journalism

So what does the US mil­it­ary really think about journ­al­ists? Below are excerpts from a report that addresses wider issues about the first Battle of Fal­lu­jah but con­tains some inter­est­ing points about “inform­a­tion oper­a­tions,” in Orwellian milspeak.

The doc­u­ment is chiefly the work of Jane Aus­ten fan Dr Sean Edwards, on whom more below. But first, his report as it relates to the media:

(U) Arab satel­lite news chan­nels were cru­cial to build­ing polit­ical pres­sure to halt mil­it­ary operations.

For example, CPA doc­u­mented 34 stor­ies on Al Jaz­eera that mis­re­por­ted or dis­tor­ted bat­tle­field events between 6 and 13 April. Between 14 and 20 April, Al Jaz­eera used the “excess­ive force” theme 11 times and allowed vari­ous anti-Coalition fac­tions to claim that U.S. forces were using cluster bombs against urban areas and kid­nap­ping and tor­tur­ing Iraqi children.

Six neg­at­ive reports by al-Arabiyah focused almost exclus­ively on the excess­ive force theme. Over­all, the qual­it­at­ive con­tent of neg­at­ive reports increas­ingly was shrill in tone, and both TV sta­tions appeared will­ing to take even the most base­less claims as fact.

(U) Dur­ing the first week of April, insur­gents invited a reporter from Al Jaz­eera, Ahmed Man­sour, and his film crew into Fal­lu­jah where they filmed scenes of dead babies from the hos­pital, pre­sum­ably killed by Coali­tion air strikes. Com­par­is­ons were made to the Palestinian Inti­fada. Chil­dren were shown bespattered with blood; moth­ers were shown scream­ing and mourn­ing day after day. Fol­low this link to see an example of the emo­tional images high­lighted by Al Jazeera.

(U) The absence of West­ern media in Fal­lu­jah allowed the insur­gents greater con­trol of inform­a­tion com­ing out of Fal­lu­jah. Because West­ern report­ers were at risk of cap­ture and behead­ing, they stayed out and were forced to pool video shot by Arab cam­era­men and played on Al Jaz­eera. This led to fur­ther rein­force­ment of anti– Coali­tion pro­pa­ganda. For example, false alleg­a­tions of up to 600 dead and 1000 wounded civil­ians could not be countered by West­ern report­ers because they did not have access to the battlefield.

(U) West­ern report­ers were also not embed­ded in Mar­ine units fight­ing in Fal­lu­jah. In the absence of coun­ter­vail­ing visual evid­ence presen­ted by mil­it­ary author­it­ies, Al Jaz­eera shaped the world’s under­stand­ing of Fallujah.

Edwards doesn’t tell you that Man­sour quit­ting Fal­lu­jah was one of the US con­di­tions of the cease­fire. Yes, con­trol of the inform­a­tional realm is cer­tainly important.

In 2006, Man­sour and his cam­era­man, Laith Mushtaq gave this inter­view on their report­ing from Fal­lu­jah. Here is Mushtaq, in his rather broken Eng­lish, describ­ing the deaths of the fam­ily of a man called Hamiz:

The fam­ily of Hamiz were gathered in the house of Hamiz, his sis­ter and their fam­ily and their daugh­ters. There was about four fam­il­ies in one place, chil­dren and ladies and women. Usu­ally men leave to leave the — some pri­vacy for the chil­dren and the ladies. The planes bombed this house, as they did for the whole neigh­bour­hood, and they brought the corpses and bod­ies to the hospital.

I went to the hos­pital. I could not see any­thing but like a sea of corpses of chil­dren and women, and mostly chil­dren, because peas­ants and farm­ers have usu­ally a lot of chil­dren. So, these were scenes that are unbe­liev­able, unimaginable.

I was tak­ing pho­to­graphs and for­cing myself to pho­to­graph, while I was at the same time cry­ing, because I used to move the cam­era from one pic­ture of a child to the father Hamiz, who was still the only one left alone from that family.

He was speak­ing with his chil­dren, and they had an infant, and the chil­dren was named Ahmed. He used to speak to him, so he used to use a nick­name Hamudi as a nick­name for Ahmed. So he used to talk to this child who was sleep­ing, and in his hand was a toy of a shape of a car. Half his head was gone.

So he used to speak to him, “Come back, my beloved. Come to my lap. I am your father,” and talk­ing to the other daugh­ter. I could not really find any one human being in one piece or intact. They were cut up. It’s bomb­ing of air­planes. You can ima­gine what could hap­pen. It was a very sad­den­ing scene.

To get an idea of what the Arab media was report­ing, you can turn to BBC Mon­it­or­ing:

10–16 APRIL 2004 Pan-Arab TVs: Al-Jazeera and Al-Arabiya, both very pop­u­lar in Iraq, car­ried lengthy video reports from cor­res­pond­ents in Fal­lu­jah and other flash­points, in addi­tion to inter­views with Iraqi politi­cians and regional experts.

In fact, neither chan­nel found room for much other than Iraq-related stor­ies in news pro­grammes through­out the week. On 9 April Al-Jazeera fea­tured a day-long spe­cial pro­gramme entitled Bagh­dad: a year under occu­pa­tion which included archival foot­age, a Fri­day prayer ser­mon, inter­views and newscasts.

It and Al-Arabiya also gave extens­ive cov­er­age to US Pres­id­ent Bush’s speech on Iraq on 13 April and the host­age crisis, includ­ing foot­age of the for­eign kid­nap vic­tims, their rel­at­ives and masked abductors.

Al-Jazeera was sent a video tape, which it did not broad­cast, of the killing of an Italian secur­ity guard abduc­ted on 12th. Both Al-Jazeera and Al-Arabiya were accused of incite­ment in their cov­er­age of the Fal­lu­jah clashes by Iraqi National Secur­ity Sec­ret­ary Muwaf­faq al-Rubay’i, echo­ing com­plaints by US officials.

Defence Sec­ret­ary Don­ald Rums­feld said on 15th that the sta­tions’ report­ing that Amer­ican troops had killed hun­dreds of civil­ians in the city was “vicious, inac­cur­ate and inexcusable.”

Fal­lu­jah: In press reports on Iraq a num­ber of themes emerged. Fal­lu­jah was widely seen as a model or sym­bol of “res­ist­ance” and “sac­ri­fice” (London-based Al-Arab al-Alamiyah, Saudi Al-Jazirah, Oman’s Al-Watan) and an indic­a­tion of Iraqis “over­whelm­ing desire for lib­er­a­tion from occu­pa­tion” (Saudi Al-Jazirah, Palestinian Al-Quds).

For London-based Al-Hayat, the street fight­ing in the city dis­pelled the “mis­con­cep­tion that res­ist­ance is the work of for­eign­ers and rem­nants of the former régime.” Events in Fal­lu­jah also revealed US “weak­ness” (Jordan’s Al-Dustur, Syria’s Al-Ba’th), with the cease-fire agree­ment a “con­fes­sion of defeat” (Pakistan’s Islam).

One dis­sent­ing voice was Kuwait’s Al-Ra’y Al-Am, which described Fal­lu­jah as the centre of Islamic extrem­ism in Iraq and saw no reason why Kuwaiti Muslims should have sym­pathy with its residents.

Another com­mon obser­va­tion was that US “claims to have lib­er­ated Iraq” were given the lie by pic­tures of the “human­it­arian cata­strophe” in Fal­lu­jah and the sup­port for Al-Sadr (Saudi Al-Watan, Lebanon’s Al-Anwar and Al-Mustaqbal). Indonesia’s Suara Pem­baruan inter­preted the rise of al-Sadr as evid­ence of a fur­ther increase in dis­sat­is­fac­tion with power-sharing, there­fore mak­ing the US mis­sion to intro­duce demo­cracy even more difficult.

24–30 APRIL 2004 Al-Jazeera TV main­tained a sharply crit­ical tone toward the US in its Iraq war cov­er­age, por­tray­ing US mil­it­ary actions in Al-Fallujah as unpro­voked viol­a­tions of the truce. It high­lighted the impact of US mil­it­ary oper­a­tions on Iraqi civil­ians, imply­ing Coali­tion forces used excess­ive force and glor­i­fied the “res­ist­ance” against Coali­tion forces.

Al-Jazeera — which says it is the favour­ite chan­nel of Iraqi view­ers — failed to dis­tin­guish between insur­gents, for­eign fight­ers and unarmed civil­ians. The chan­nel rarely repor­ted insur­gents as instig­at­ing attacks against Coali­tion forces, instead por­tray­ing US mil­it­ary actions as unpro­voked viol­a­tions of the truce.

Des­pite this, it did provide time to the US view­point, cov­er­ing US press con­fer­ences and speeches and invit­ing US offi­cials to com­ment on events and par­ti­cip­ate in talk shows e.g. on 25 April it aired repeatedly an “exclus­ive” two-minute recor­ded inter­view with US civil admin­is­trator Paul Bremer.

The 24-hour news chan­nel also offered enter­tain­ment that did not por­tray the US in an unfa­vour­able light…Al Jaz­eera man­aging dir­ector Wad­dah Khan­far recently announced the chan­nel intro­duce a tour­ism pro­gramme in an effort to “add a softer dimen­sion” to the chan­nel (Qatari daily The Pen­in­sula)

On 27 April US Sec­ret­ary of State Colin Pow­ell accused the chan­nel of dam­aging rela­tions between Doha and Wash­ing­ton, pick­ing up cri­ti­cism by senior US offi­cials who charge Al-Jazeera and Dubai-based Al-Arabiya TV with bias and stok­ing anti-US sentiment.

The pan-Arab press on 28th slammed these US attempts “to sup­press the Arab satel­lite chan­nels” (London’s Al-Quds al-Arabi). Al-Jazeera itself on the 30th repor­ted sev­eral inter­na­tional groups oppos­ing US pres­sure on Qatar to influ­ence the channel’s edit­or­ial content.

In the wider Middle East­ern press there was a tor­rent of attacks on all aspects of US strategy and tac­tics in Iraq. Many papers poin­ted to a heightened state of crisis in the dir­ec­tion of the “unjus­ti­fied” US-led occu­pa­tion brought on by the spec­tacle of “daily killings” (Jordan’s Al-Dustur, echoed by Oman’s Al-Watan and Oman, Iran’s Arabic Al-Vefagh, Egypt’s Al-Ahram, and Al-Jumhuriyah, UAE’s Al-Ittihad and Akh­bar al-Arab). Some edit­or­i­als chose to home in on cas­u­al­ties being suffered by inno­cent civil­ians in the fight­ing (Jordan’s Al-Dustur, Egypt’s Al-Jumhuriyah, UAE’s Al-Bayan,) while oth­ers feared the entire polit­ical devel­op­ment in Iraq had ground to a halt (Lebanon’s Al-Mustaqbal, Jordan’s Al-Ra’y).

Would “inform­a­tion oper­a­tions” have made much of a dif­fer­ence to that groundswell of opin­ion? Edwards thinks so (my ital­ics):

(U) The rel­at­ive fail­ure of the first Battle of Fal­lu­jah com­pared to the more suc­cess­ful second Battle of Fal­lu­jah (Novem­ber 2004) offers use­ful polit­ical– mil­it­ary les­sons for how to defeat asym­met­ric adversar­ies in com­plex environments.
  • (U) The enemy will seek to util­ize the human, inform­a­tional, and phys­ical com­plex­ity of urban areas to avoid dir­ect mil­it­ary con­front­a­tion and exploit Amer­ican polit­ical and inform­a­tional vulnerabilities.
  • (U) Shap­ing oper­a­tions that clear civil­ians from the bat­tle­field offers many pos­it­ive second-order effects. In Fal­lu­jah in April 2004, I MEF only had a few days to shape the envir­on­ment before enga­ging in decis­ive com­bat oper­a­tions. The remain­ing
    non­com­batants provided cover for insur­gents, restrained CJTF-7’s employ­ment of com­bat power, and provided emo­tional fod­der for Arab media to exploit.
  • (U) Inform­a­tion oper­a­tions are increas­ingly import­ant in a 21st Cen­tury world where cable tele­vi­sion runs 24 hours a day and the Inter­net offers pro­pa­ganda oppor­tun­it­ies for insur­gent and ter­ror­ist groups.
  • (U) The media pres­ence on the bat­tle­field was con­trolled by the enemy; con­sequently, they shaped much of the inform­a­tion the world viewed dur­ing the fight. In VIGILANT RESOLVE there were few report­ers embed­ded in Mar­ine infantry units; in Oper­a­tion AL FAJR there were 91 embeds rep­res­ent­ing 60 media out­lets. False alleg­a­tions of non­com­batant cas­u­al­ties were made by Arab media in both cam­paigns, but in the second case embed­ded West­ern report­ers offered a rebut­tal.

It is quite likely that there were civil­ian cas­u­al­ties in their hun­dreds. Not unsur­pris­ing when you launch a major offens­ive against a city of tens of thou­sands. You can­not bomb a city and call the vic­tims emo­tional fod­der. Edwards fails to take into con­sid­er­a­tion the prob­lems of war­fare in a sup­port­ive but non­com­batant civil­ian environment.

Incid­ent­ally, in Decem­ber 2007, a Ser­bian gen­eral was jailed for 33 years by the ICTY for lead­ing the siege of Sara­jevo. You can read the full judg­ment here [pdf], (sec­tion 914 onwards is par­tic­u­larly interesting).

The key ques­tion about civil­ian deaths in Fal­lu­jah, bey­ond the legal and eth­ical ones, was — does the audi­ence care? In the West, the answer was not much. In the Middle East, and espe­cially in Iraq — it was rather a lot.

The Edwards report comes cour­tesy of one of my favour­ite resources, Wikileaks [pdf]. But who wrote this stuff? Not a Jane Aus­ten fan surely? Well, actu­ally, it would be this guy:

Dr. Sean Edwards, Intel­li­gence Ana­lyst, National Ground Intel­li­gence Cen­ter
Former Army Ranger. Con­duc­ted a study on Oper­a­tions in Com­plex Ter­rain, to include the Battle of Fal­lu­jah — hav­ing a sig­ni­fic­ant effect on Army think­ing on doc­trine and tactics.

So is Dr Edwards right about the impact of West­ern report­ers? Per­haps in the case of West­ern out­lets. Take this piece from the for­eign editor of the Wash­ing­ton Times on 11 April, 2004 about their cor­res­pond­ent, Wil­lis Wit­ter:

Mr. Wit­ter simply covered him­self from head to foot in a hooded Arab robe and slouched down in the front seat of a car along­side his Iraqi driver-translator for the 30-mile drive from Bagh­dad to Fallujah.

Once in the city, they nav­ig­ated through coali­tion road­b­locks and made their way to the com­mand post from which Mar­ine Lt. Col. Bren­nan Byrne was dir­ect­ing the battle and joined up with a hand­ful of West­ern report­ers already embed­ded with the unit…

Reports had begun appear­ing on the wire agen­cies earlier on Wed­nes­day say­ing coali­tion forces had bombed a mosque in Fal­lu­jah as res­id­ents gathered for after­noon pray­ers and that as many as 40 wor­ship­pers had been killed in the strike.

The reports, based largely on tele­phone inter­views with hos­pital offi­cials in Fal­lu­jah, had the obvi­ous poten­tial to infuri­ate ordin­ary Iraqis and fur­ther inflame the situ­ation both in the city and across the coun­try. But by being in Fal­lu­jah, Mr. Wit­ter was able to get an altern­at­ive account of what had happened from Col. Byrne.

Accord­ing to the col­onel, the Amer­ic­ans had been com­ing under heavy fire from the mosque and the com­pound in which it sat, begin­ning when a rocket-propelled gren­ade struck a Mar­ine vehicle and wounded five men.

Strikes with a Hell­fire mis­sile and then with a 500-pound laser-guided bomb were called in only when the fight­ing per­sisted for hours, and even then the bomb had been dropped in such a way that the mosque itself suffered little dam­age, Mr. Wit­ter reported.

When Mar­ines entered the mosque a half-hour after the bomb ended the fight­ing, they found the build­ing empty and its floor littered with shell cas­ings. How many people were killed or injured in the mosque could not be determ­ined, but it seems reas­on­able to assume that few of them were inno­cent worshippers.

Mr. Witter’s abil­ity to get bal­anced inform­a­tion about the incid­ent into the pub­lic arena may have, in some small way, helped to pre­vent a bad situ­ation from get­ting worse.

Chalk one up to info ops! Embed­ding people so they can cover press­ers nearer the front line does not really make the report­ing grade, besides it would hardly have won over Arab media outlets.

Unlike Wit­ter, Ned Parker of Agence France Presse was actu­ally embed­ded with the Mar­ines in Fal­lu­jah. On 9 April 2004, the Times ran a joint dis­patch from Parker, he got a dif­fer­ent take from Lt Col Byrne. :

An exact death toll was impossible to ascer­tain, but the dir­ector of Fallujah’s hos­pital claimed that 280 Iraqis had been killed and 400 wounded since the offens­ive to cap­ture those respons­ible for the deaths of four Amer­ican con­tract­ors began on Monday.

At least ten Mar­ines are thought to have been killed, includ­ing two yesterday…

This is like Hue City in Viet­nam,” said Lieutenant-Colonel Bren­nan Byrne, refer­ring to the city that became a byword for lethal street fight­ing, the type of com­bat most feared by US com­mand­ers when they invaded Iraq last year…

Cap­tain Chris Chown, a Mar­ine bat­talion air officer, said that the Iraqis were fight­ing back with hit-and-run tac­tics and snipers, using small-arms fire and rock­ets against the Americans.

It’s tough. These guys are determ­ined. One by one they can’t stand up to the US mil­it­ary force so they are using all the scenery avail­able to them,” Cap­tain Chown told a reporter who is embed­ded with the unit.

One guy can basic­ally hold down a whole squad. He shoots from one win­dow and pops in another. They are fierce and very determ­ined but they can’t shoot straight. They are basic­ally spray­ing and praying.”

But Cap­tain Chown expressed con­cern that the out­gunned Iraqis could end up win­ning the battle of pub­lic opin­ion if the fight­ing con­tin­ues. “I hope one day we don’t get so jaded we just roll down the streets in armoured vehicles shoot­ing at whatever moves,” he said. “If that hap­pens, we need to take a step back and look at the human­ity of the place or we’ve just lost our mission.

We are at a cross­roads in Fal­lu­jah. You get to a crit­ical junc­ture where one small event is going to tip things for us or against us. If we’re not there already, we’re get­ting pretty close.”

James Hider of the Times was also in Fal­lu­jah in mid-April. Not every Mar­ine was as con­sidered as Cap­tain Chown. Inform­a­tion oper­a­tions are not neces­sar­ily won like this:

The Mar­ines have little regard for their foes’ mettle or fight­ing ability.

When we cap­ture them, they cry like babies. Then they p*** them­selves,” Lieu­ten­ant Michael Liguorni said.

We find these little drug bottles around; we think half of these guys are drugged up,” he said, as the eerie hiss and bang of rocket-propelled gren­ades broke the silence, fol­lowed by the rattle of rifle fire and the zing of ricochets.

Under the head­line, Mar­ines los­ing the battle for Fal­lu­jah, Hider pretty much summed up the situ­ation at the end of April 2004:

After three weeks of fight­ing that has killed hun­dreds of people, forced 65,000 from their homes and threatened to shat­ter ties between the coali­tion and its polit­ical allies in Iraq, Amer­ican forces appear to be no closer to their aim of flush­ing out for­eign insur­gents and the killers of four US defence con­tract­ors in Fallujah.

US Mar­ines were hours away from renew­ing a full-scale attack on the city this week­end when they were ordered by the coalition’s polit­ical lead­er­ship to rethink their plans, as Paul Bremer, the coali­tion chief admin­is­trator, rushed to the city for last-ditch peace talks. Appar­ently shaken by the polit­ical fal­lout from the fight­ing, Mr Bremer and Pres­id­ent Bush flinched from another confrontation.

The battle has been muddled by cross-currents of mil­it­ary expedi­ency and polit­ical imper­at­ives, with the United Nations envoy to Iraq demand­ing an end to the military’s heavy-handed tactics.

Instead of a wave of Amer­ican mil­it­ary muscle sweep­ing in, the city will be slowly inund­ated by a rising tide of joint US-Iraqi patrols to restore secur­ity — an attempt by coali­tion lead­ers to show they are try­ing to avoid bloodshed.

A mil­it­ary solu­tion is not going to be the solu­tion here unless everything else fails,” Major-General James Mat­tis said as his men pre­pared to con­duct the heav­ily armed joint patrols this week, after put­ting Iraqi secur­ity forces through an intens­ive, but brief, train­ing camp.

That mes­sage is a far cry from the oper­a­tion launched with tanks, heli­copter gun­ships and air­craft three weeks ago, when the Mar­ines stormed the Sunni city to hunt for guer­ril­las and for­eign fight­ers. As the res­ist­ance proved as fierce as any­thing that coali­tion forces have so far encountered, the secur­ity clamp­down rap­idly escal­ated into a pub­lic rela­tions dis­aster for the coali­tion. Sunni lead­ers threatened to walk out of the Iraqi Gov­ern­ing Council.

The coali­tion argued that it was adher­ing to the Geneva Con­ven­tion, but the res­ult was a howl of rage from Iraqis across the coun­try. A repor­ted death toll of at least 600 met an out­cry in the Arab world.

At the same time, the fero­city of the res­ist­ance — coin­cid­ing with an upris­ing by Shia mili­tia­men in other cit­ies — made the fight­ers her­oes in the eyes of many and caused sev­eral coali­tion part­ners to ques­tion their troop commitment.

While the Mar­ines believe that they are more than cap­able of tak­ing the town, the polit­ical price has proved to be too high. Restor­ing the peace has become the pri­or­ity as the flash­point city threatened to act as a cata­lyst for unit­ing Sunni and Shia hard­liners into one for­mid­able front.

Edwards’ own con­clu­sions?

(U) In sum­mary, sev­eral factors explain the dif­fer­ence in out­comes between Fal­lu­jah I and II.
    Longer shap­ing oper­a­tions to evac­u­ate civil­ians, con­trol of the inform­a­tional realm, more aggress­ive COIN oper­a­tions in sur­round­ing towns to pro­tect Coali­tion MSRs, solid polit­ical back­ing from a more stable Iraqi gov­ern­ment, and lar­ger forces that con­tained a greater per­cent­age of mech­an­ized units to speed up the cam­paign all con­trib­uted to the rel­at­ive suc­cess of Fal­lu­jah II (Novem­ber 2004) versus the fail­ure of Fal­lu­jah I.

The inform­a­tional realm — for those of us in the reality-based com­munity — is the world of events.

My advice to those Dr Edwards would reach? Don’t unleash hell and then com­plain about the smell of sulphur.

Rumblings at Al Jazeera English

From the Friends of Al Jaz­eera blog:

Well it looks like my hus­band and I (and our chil­dren) will be leav­ing Doha sooner than planned.

Al Jaz­eera Inter­na­tional (or Al Jaz­eera Eng­lish as we were forced to call it after objec­tions from the Arabic news chan­nel) was launched 13 months ago.

Since then two things have happened:

First, the chan­nel has built itself a repu­ta­tion as an author­it­at­ive news source on world issues…

The second thing that has happened is that the people who have been respons­ible for this phe­nom­enal innov­a­tion in the world of broad­cast­ing have been treated like shit.

Yes, you heard right — like shit!

In the begin­ning, they were encour­aged, induced, seduced, implored, begged to come out to Doha to make this dream a pos­sib­il­ity; they were wel­comed with open arms.

That was then — this is now.

Now, they are being treated with dis­respect, ingrat­it­ude, dis­dain, even down­right con­tempt. They are lied to, ignored, cheated, abused, ridiculed.

This is all done, of course, to “per­suade” them to leave.

Nobody said launches were easy. Oddly enough AJE’s has been remark­ably blood­less, although both Paul Gibbs and now Steve Clark have now left the start-up team.

Al Jazeera’s return to Saudi Arabia

Back in Octo­ber, I poin­ted to this post, sug­gest­ing that the fol­low­ing deal might be under way between KSA and Qatar:

  1. Saudi Ara­bia would return its ambas­sador to Qatar. There has been no Saudi envoy in Doha since he was recalled in 2002.
  2. Saudi King Abdul­lah bin Abdul Aziz would attend the Gulf Coöper­a­tion Coun­cil in Qatar in Decem­ber. Abdul­lah had boy­cot­ted the meet­ing of regional lead­ers when it was last hos­ted in Doha in 2002.
  3. Qatar would see to it that al-Jazeera broad­casts would no longer “under­mine” or “cam­paign” against Saudi Arabia.
  4. Saudi Ara­bia would in turn per­mit al-Jazeera to estab­lish a bur­eau in Riyadh.

And now today we have ambas­sad­ors return­ing and an oppor­tun­ity to report the Haj.

But what of the cyn­ical sug­ges­tion in point three?